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Sara's avatar

This reminds of an old Norm Macdonald bit about how he hates sunsets lol 

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Julian's avatar

It woulda been embarrassing for all of us if you turned out to be a bad fiction writer, but I liked this a lot! I’d second what Benny said about not staying rigorously efficient, especially with adjective use (two “ethereal”s might be too many though). I’d love to read the longer piece when it’s done!

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